A very good story that could have used some editing: That Trae has a fear of birds might be interesting, but not 565 words' worth. Talk about burying the lead.
But once the writer turned to the topic at hand, I enjoyed it very much.
A very good story that could have used some editing: That Trae has a fear of birds might be interesting, but not 565 words' worth. Talk about burying the lead.
But once the writer turned to the topic at hand, I enjoyed it very much.